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What Producers Actually Read: How to Pitch a TV Show That Gets Taken Seriously

Musanna Ahmed is a development executive at Pure Fiction Television, one of the UK's leading independent drama companies. In this Mriia Mentors session, he broke down how development really works from the inside: what happens to a project after it lands on a desk, what a strong pitch deck actually needs, and how to approach the industry as a filmmaker without an agent.

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🇬🇧 UK Development
About this session
Dev Executive at Pure Fiction TV · London
IP Rivers of London · Baztan Trilogy · in development

"The shows that resonate are the ones where you understand the writer is the best person to tell this story because they have a real connection to the material."

What a Development Executive Actually Does

A development executive's job is to find stories to tell. That means scouting for IP: books, articles, real events, short films, documentaries, as well as writers, directors, and any other source of a good story. Musanna described how anything can be a starting point, including a single article that sparks an original way into a topic.

The role has become more pressurised in recent years for a clear reason: broadcasters and streaming services don't want to take unnecessary risks. They want proof of concept. A book that already has an audience, a short film that demonstrates a tone, a documentary that proves there's a real story there. This is why IP, existing material has become so central to development, and why original stories face a steeper climb.

"Because everyone's asking the same questions to ChatGPT, there's pressure to find ideas that feel genuinely different. It still requires human creativity and thinking outside the box."

— Musanna Ahmed

Musanna also noted the pressure AI is creating in the role itself: if everyone is using the same tools to research and generate ideas, the development executive's job becomes even more about having genuine taste and the ability to recognise something original when they see it.


What Happens to Your Project After It Lands on a Desk

This is the part most filmmakers and writers never see and it's exactly the kind of insight that changes how you approach a pitch. Musanna walked through the stages a project goes through from the moment it arrives.

The exception at the top: Experienced writers with strong track records can sometimes verbally pitch a show and get commissioned without writing anything first. The broadcaster trusts the writer enough to fund it on the strength of their name and the idea alone. For emerging writers, the written materials are non-negotiable.

Internal Stakes. External Stakes. And Why Most Loglines Miss Both.

This was one of the most practical parts of the session. Musanna identified the single most common problem he sees in loglines and synopses: an imbalance between internal and external stakes.

"I read a pitch about an alien who falls in love on Earth. All I could understand was the internal stakes: how the alien would feel human emotions. I had no idea what this meant for a TV show. Where are they? What changes around them across seven episodes?"

— Musanna Ahmed

His point: a story about internal change alone is a film. A TV show requires an engine that can drive external change across multiple hours of story. Both need to be visible in your logline, not just who your character is and how they'll change, but what the world looks like around them and how that changes too.

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Internal stakes

How will this character change as a person? What emotional journey are they on? What do they believe at the start that they won't believe by the end?

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External stakes

What changes around the character? What is the story engine that drives external action across six, eight, ten hours? Why is this a show and not a 90-minute film?

Two Ways to Write a Logline

Musanna described two approaches, using the same story as an example where a man who wakes up after a car accident and discovers someone tried to kill him:

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The practical logline

"A man gets into a car accident and has to wake up and find out who tried to kill him." Clear, plot-based, functional. Tells you what happens.

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The philosophical logline

"A man has to reckon with the fact that his friends are no longer who he thought they were after they're implicated in his attempted murder." Character-driven, asks a moral question, tells you what it means.

Neither is automatically better, it depends on the show. But the one Musanna responds to is the one that tells him what the show is trying to say. Genre and plot have been done before. The loglines that stand out are the ones where he can feel that the writer has something specific to say about the world and that they're the right person to say it.

"Genre and story — we've heard basically every story idea possible. But the ones that have real resonance are the ones where you understand the show is trying to say something about the world. And this writer is the best person to tell it because they have a real connection to the material."

— Musanna Ahmed

As a concrete example: one of the best pitches he has read in recent years, now commissioned by a major UK broadcaster, opened not with the story, but with real statistics about survival rates after critical cardiac events in London's leading hospitals. It wasn't telling him the story yet. It was showing him the world, in precise factual terms, so that he understood exactly what kind of show this was going to be. The writer had a personal connection to the material. He believed them immediately.


What a Pitch Deck Actually Needs — and What to Leave Out

Musanna was specific about what he looks for and what he doesn't. The two things he considers most important in a pitch deck are ones that many filmmakers either skip or underestimate.

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How it works as a TV show

Tell him what happens in episode one and how it ends, with a clear sense of where episode two goes. This doesn't need to be detailed. It just needs to make him understand why this is ten hours of story, not ninety minutes.

Why now

Every person who puts money into a show will ask: why this, and why now? The answer can be topical: a war, a social issue or purely formal: audience appetite for a certain genre, a gap in the market. But you need one, and it needs to be yours.

What you don't need: A budget breakdown. Musanna is clear that production budgets are not something a writer or director should include in a TV pitch deck. The channel determines the budget. Including a pie chart of your post-production spend doesn't impress anyone, it just signals that you don't understand how the financing model works.

The other familiar elements are good characters, visual references, mood that he takes for granted in any reasonable pitch deck. They matter, but they're not what separates the pitches that get attention from the ones that don't. What separates them is the clarity of the episodic structure and the conviction of the "why now."

Musanna doesn't think one is categorically better than the other — they have different challenges. An adaptation's job isn't always to faithfully recreate the book. Sometimes the responsibility is to break beyond the book's existing audience and reach people who've never read it. That can mean doing things differently, which creates tension with fans. Game of Thrones is now more associated with the TV show than the books. The writer's challenge in adaptation is finding the balance between fidelity and accessibility and being able to defend whatever decisions they make.
In TV it's particularly difficult, because the economics of shooting eight episodes efficiently mean you almost always need a second director for the second block. Barry Jenkins directed every episode of The Underground Railroad on Amazon — but that's exceptionally rare and almost certainly took a very long time. The more practical model: the writer-director leads the first block, sets the tone and visual template, and trusts someone else to direct the second block in their style. The same logic applies to writing — a lead writer might write three or four episodes and have other writers deliver the rest, then do a polish across all of them. That's how The Gentleman on Netflix was made.
It depends entirely on the show. An Apple show set in Madrid, Safe Houses, had writers from across the world working over Zoom. The next season of a Godzilla show had writers from Japan, the UK, and America. But a very British show like Rivals on Disney+ (David Tennant, entirely set in the English countryside) had a completely British writing team. The right question is: does your project have an international dimension that would make international voices genuinely useful? If it does, producers are very open to it. If it doesn't, pushing for international writers can feel forced.

How to Approach Production Companies Without an Agent

This is the honest, difficult answer, and Musanna gave it directly. The UK industry operates largely through agents. They are the gatekeepers between writers and production companies. Cold emails to companies usually go nowhere, not because companies are indifferent to new talent, but because the volume makes it impossible to respond to everything.

"Cold emailing is pretty difficult. People will just say: we don't really do things without an agent. But if you can find ways to engage with people directly in person, that is massively helpful. People are much more willing to connect when they can actually see you."

— Musanna Ahmed

His recommended path: find the events and forums where production companies are specifically trying to connect with talent beyond their existing pool. These exist — and they're more accessible than most filmmakers realise.

🎪 Events & Platforms Worth Knowing
  • Scribe Lounge — UK Screenwriters CommunityFree online community platform for UK screenwriters. Regularly hosts events with production companies, commissioners, and established writers. Musanna specifically recommended this. Over 7,000 members. Also runs Elevate — an annual TV drama competition that gets finalists' work in front of 75+ UK production companies.
  • Edinburgh TV FestivalOne of the UK's most important industry events. Panels, workshops, and networking with commissioners, producers, and writers. If you can attend, it is one of the most concentrated places in Europe to build real relationships.
  • Series Mania — Lille, FranceEuropean TV industry festival and co-production market. Musanna mentioned it as a place where you can engage directly with people across the European industry. Particularly relevant for writers and directors looking at international co-productions.
  • London Screenwriters FestivalAnnual event for screenwriters at all stages. Includes a Pitchfest where writers pitch directly to industry executives. One of the few structured environments where cold pitching is expected and welcomed.

Musanna also mentioned that some of these events don't need to be in person: webinars and online events work too, particularly for connecting with agents. The key is finding the spaces where companies are specifically looking outward, rather than approaching them in a context where you're simply one of thousands of emails.


When a Good Idea Isn't Enough — Collaboration Behaviours That End Relationships

Musanna was asked directly: what behaviours from writers and directors make him think a collaboration won't work, even if the material is strong? He gave two clear answers.

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Slowness and unresponsiveness

Missing deadlines. Taking a very long time to get back to people. This travels fast in a small industry. If a production company asks about working with a writer and hears "they're unreliable, very slow" — that's extremely hard to come back from.

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Not taking notes

Everyone has notes: channels, actors, production companies. A writer who isn't open to notes is extremely difficult to work with. In TV especially, where you're building hours of story collaboratively, the ability to receive and respond to notes isn't optional.

He acknowledged there are famous exceptions: established writers who are slow or refuse notes and still get hired. But that happens because they're already successful enough that productions will absorb the difficulty. For emerging writers, those same behaviours close doors permanently.

On collaboration in TV: Writing eight episodes alone is hard and usually makes less sense than working with a writers' room. The best model is typically a lead writer who sets the tone, writes a few episodes, and works with other writers on the rest. Being open to that structure, rather than insisting on sole authorship, makes you a much more attractive collaborator.

What the UK Market Is Buying Right Now

Musanna was honest about the difficulty of answering this question, market appetite shifts constantly, and what's true now may not be true in two years. But he described what she's seeing in conversations with buyers and in the shows currently getting commissioned.

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Adrenalised thrillers

Fast-paced, high-stakes, real-time. Shows like Bodyguard, Hijack, Red Eye. European buyers, including French financiers who own UK labels, are actively looking for more of this.

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Romance

Off the back of Rivals and the gay hockey romance series Heated Rivalry, there's clear appetite for romance across streaming platforms. Netflix are already commissioning more.

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Domestic thrillers

Families with secrets. Marriages under pressure. Shows like The Girlfriend Experience, All Her Fault, His and Hers, The Perfect Couple. A huge amount of this material comes from books, publishers are a rich source of IP for this genre.

The big central question

Across genres, what connects successful shows is a strong moral question at the centre — something an audience genuinely asks themselves. Harlan Coben's Runaway: what would you do if your child fell in with the wrong crowd? Simple, primal, universal.

On the state of the industry: the UK went through a very difficult contraction in 2023 and 2024 — teams were cut, some independent companies closed, there was significant turbulence at Channel 4 and Paramount UK. Musanna felt the market has stabilised. The most reliable places to pitch right now are Netflix, BBC, and ITV — they have stable teams and clear long-term goals.


AI in Development — Tool, Not Storyteller

Musanna had a considered, non-alarmist view on AI. He expects it to become a standard tool: for research, for checking whether a scene is working, for accelerating parts of the process. But he does not believe it will replace the fundamental work of development, for one clear reason.

"Our entire industry is built on human judgment, taste, and intuition. We're going to look at an AI script or an AI pitch and make a decision on whether it's to our taste. And so far, I've not seen AI art that has connected with audiences the way real storytelling does."

— Musanna Ahmed

His observation: the AI content that generates the most reaction does so as spectacle, people are impressed by the technology, not moved by the story. Nobody is asking what happens in the sequel to an AI film. Nobody is emotionally invested in AI characters. The audience response is "how did they do that?" rather than "I need to watch this again."

For filmmakers worried about AI displacing them: Musanna's view is that the human connection in storytelling where the writer, who has lived something, who has a specific angle on a specific world is precisely what AI cannot replicate. That's exactly what makes a pitch land.

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